Now: The menu repeats the two-beat slogan device in the headline, description, free-play note, and warrior-section description.

Change to: Keep “Small paws. Big battles.”; replace the description with “A turn-based hamster battle game.”, the play note with “Play free without a wallet.”, and the warrior description with “Choose a warrior to explore their abilities.” Preserve the existing compact spacing.

Why: The supplied copy checklist limits slogan stacks to three and asks for one plain descriptive sentence beneath the headline.

Now: Every completed battle displays “Saved in this browser” even after saveProgress returns false. The alert correctly says saving failed, but dismissing it also changes the desktop indicator from “Session only” to “Local progress” without any successful write.

Change to: Keep persistence status separate from the dismissible warning. Pass the actual save result into BattleView; show “Saved in this browser” only after success and “Session only · Progress could not be saved” on failure. Dismissing the notice must leave the session-only indicator intact.

Why: Success and failure states must say only what the application knows; players need accurate information about the brief’s locally saved progress.

Now: The first Connect interaction replaces the focused launcher with the lazy wallet component. Modal captures BODY as the previous active element, so Escape closes the dialog without returning focus to the current Connect wallet button. Later opens restore focus correctly.

Change to: Give the rendered wallet header button a ref and use it as the wallet dialog’s explicit focus-restoration target after closing, including the initial lazy-load path. Keep the existing lazy loading and connector behavior.

Why: A keyboard user closing a modal should return to its invoking control; the review checklist explicitly requires native focus behavior across the main interaction states.